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Hi - I have reorganised your article somewhat by placing a parent article in mainspace (click the link for 'parent article'), which will contain links to all the bad historyarticles in Wikipedia.  I have moved and edited material in your article and placed it in the parent article.  The child article will then be expressly about the former Yugoslavia and its history, or rather, about the treatment in the Wikipedia articles compared to the modern independent scholarly view.  I have looked at some of the Wikipedia articles and you seem to have stumbled upon a real can of worms.  Well done. I have edited the article to remove some of the strident turns of phrase you have used - to make a really strong and forceful case it is necessary to speak quieter, rather than louder. Regards [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 04:16, 4 October 2009 (PDT)
 
Hi - I have reorganised your article somewhat by placing a parent article in mainspace (click the link for 'parent article'), which will contain links to all the bad historyarticles in Wikipedia.  I have moved and edited material in your article and placed it in the parent article.  The child article will then be expressly about the former Yugoslavia and its history, or rather, about the treatment in the Wikipedia articles compared to the modern independent scholarly view.  I have looked at some of the Wikipedia articles and you seem to have stumbled upon a real can of worms.  Well done. I have edited the article to remove some of the strident turns of phrase you have used - to make a really strong and forceful case it is necessary to speak quieter, rather than louder. Regards [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 04:16, 4 October 2009 (PDT)
 
: PS See my links about Bleiburg [http://www.mywikibiz.com/User_talk:Ockham/Wikipedia_%26_Political_Agendas#The_Bleiberg_massacre] - the edits by 'Direktor' are laughable. [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 04:43, 4 October 2009 (PDT)
 
: PS See my links about Bleiburg [http://www.mywikibiz.com/User_talk:Ockham/Wikipedia_%26_Political_Agendas#The_Bleiberg_massacre] - the edits by 'Direktor' are laughable. [[User:Ockham|Ockham]] 04:43, 4 October 2009 (PDT)
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I would like to expand the parent article with how the political spin is done on Wiki,  which I'm going to add latter. This should apply to all articles, so we are not just picking on  "The Old Dictator Tito" article. I've seen that you have already started on that, which is great.
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Also the way Wiki is becoming more like George Orwell's books "1984 & Animal Farm" (with every passing day). That's if you agree with that. 
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Wiki's future and how this going effect information on the Internet & society.
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Wiki's editorial style of work and ''is this the way to built an encyclopedia''?
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The Dictator Tito article needs more info on how he ran Yugoslavia in the first two decades and why it isn't their on his article. From 1944 onwards it was very similar to Stalin. Tito was the member Soviet Communist Party and the Soviet secret police-NKVD (this is mention in the Wiki article). He and his comrades set up KGB style police (UDBA’s & OZNA) in former Yugoslavia and had Partisan Death Squads doing there thing towards the end of the war, I met two of them. I will expand on all of these in a encyclopaedic fashion. Work on Bleiburg massacre is great. On weekend I check out other articles and there is a pattern happening their, will inform latter.  Ps Partisan Editor’s Hm mm, maybe Comrade Editors would be better. Cheers [[User:Peter Z.|Peter Z.]] 21:30, 5 October 2009 (PDT)

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Hi - I have reorganised your article somewhat by placing a parent article in mainspace (click the link for 'parent article'), which will contain links to all the bad historyarticles in Wikipedia. I have moved and edited material in your article and placed it in the parent article. The child article will then be expressly about the former Yugoslavia and its history, or rather, about the treatment in the Wikipedia articles compared to the modern independent scholarly view. I have looked at some of the Wikipedia articles and you seem to have stumbled upon a real can of worms. Well done. I have edited the article to remove some of the strident turns of phrase you have used - to make a really strong and forceful case it is necessary to speak quieter, rather than louder. Regards Ockham 04:16, 4 October 2009 (PDT)

PS See my links about Bleiburg [1] - the edits by 'Direktor' are laughable. Ockham 04:43, 4 October 2009 (PDT)

I would like to expand the parent article with how the political spin is done on Wiki, which I'm going to add latter. This should apply to all articles, so we are not just picking on "The Old Dictator Tito" article. I've seen that you have already started on that, which is great. Also the way Wiki is becoming more like George Orwell's books "1984 & Animal Farm" (with every passing day). That's if you agree with that. Wiki's future and how this going effect information on the Internet & society. Wiki's editorial style of work and is this the way to built an encyclopedia?

The Dictator Tito article needs more info on how he ran Yugoslavia in the first two decades and why it isn't their on his article. From 1944 onwards it was very similar to Stalin. Tito was the member Soviet Communist Party and the Soviet secret police-NKVD (this is mention in the Wiki article). He and his comrades set up KGB style police (UDBA’s & OZNA) in former Yugoslavia and had Partisan Death Squads doing there thing towards the end of the war, I met two of them. I will expand on all of these in a encyclopaedic fashion. Work on Bleiburg massacre is great. On weekend I check out other articles and there is a pattern happening their, will inform latter. Ps Partisan Editor’s Hm mm, maybe Comrade Editors would be better. Cheers Peter Z. 21:30, 5 October 2009 (PDT)